Halloween Fest: I Watch You Sleep

31 Oct

Author: She’s a Lunatic
Pairing/MC: mystery narrator
Genre(s): AU, horror, general
Wordcount: 100
Prompt/recipient: N/A
Rating: T
Warnings: N/A
Summary: Sometime soon, I’ll get tired of watching.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

I Watch You Sleep

I watch you sleep. When you close your eyes, I’m right here. I feel your warm breath on my face but you won’t feel mine. I don’t breathe.

Your heartbeat slows as you fall asleep. You won’t hear mine.

You won’t hear me at all. I don’t make a sound.

But you feel me watching you.

You open your eyes. I’m gone before you can see me. You tell yourself you’re imagining it.

You’re not. I watch you. There’s nothing you can do to protect yourself. Sometime soon, I’ll get tired of watching. Sometime soon, you simply won’t wake up.


Posted by on October 31, 2011 in Halloween Fest


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9 responses to “Halloween Fest: I Watch You Sleep

  1. Starry

    October 31, 2011 at 11:30 pm


    I shivered at that last line. Totally creepy.

  2. vampireisthenewblack

    November 1, 2011 at 2:58 am

    I see a creeptastic Darkward in this drabble. I like creeptastic Darkward 🙂

  3. sapphirescribe

    November 1, 2011 at 8:30 am

    Bravo. The last line… just… yeah. Can we get a follow up? “I Taste You In Your Sleep”? mmm…

  4. im_not_a_lizard

    November 1, 2011 at 8:51 am

    The way it should have gone between Edward and Bella.

  5. mugglemom08

    November 2, 2011 at 7:32 pm

    *shiver* I’m seeing a creeptastic Darkward, too.

  6. venisenvy

    November 3, 2011 at 2:48 pm

    Oooh…I like this one a lot. No guesses, though. I need more coffee.

  7. Violet (@a_violet_a)

    November 3, 2011 at 4:55 pm

    Creepy creepy unsettling drabble. Quite lovely though. I liked it very much.


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